War is a rush every single day sometimes the rush is too much for people to handle. War has a specific sound that I don’t know but I think it sounds like the wilderness and gun fire. War has a terrible sight of blood dead bodies and evil. The war has many bad tastes like the taste of cheap food every day and the taste of your friends dyeing. You feel like you want to give up and you also feel like you just want to kill.
Great word choice! The taste of bad food, the sounds of the wilderness; these give good sensory imagery to the reader. There is a conflict between adrenaline and fear that you have conveyed without actually specifying either word. Good job!
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