· The prince invites the princess to the ball
· The price and princess are dancing
· People start a fight on the top floor
· They hit the chandelier and it starts to fall over the prince and princess.
· The prince pushes the princess out of the way
· And the prince gets crushes
When the prince is dancing with the dashing princes a tremendous fight breaks out and the one man throws another over the balcony and lands on the chandelier and then the chandelier falls over the prince and princess and the prince pushes the princess out of the way and the chandelier crushes the prince and there is blood everywhere and the princesses white dress turned red of blood.
How very gallant, for the prince to push her out of the way. This is a nice interpretation of how the scene would have ended, though you might consider what, if anything, could happen next. What might the princess's reaction have been, for example?
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of action packed into one paragraph; watch out for run-on sentences, however.