There are many great quotes in this story. The quote isn't from the woman or the boy it is from the narrator. When I read the part "the boy looked at the door- looked at the sink- looked at the door again- and went to the sink, because a 15 year old boy usually would take off down the hallway. Since the boy has started to trust the woman he just listens to what she is telling him to do. At that point as a reader you realize that the boy got caught in a bad position and now he realized how good its is to be good.
I like how you used a quote in this piece. Although there is no author's note and that might make a person kinda confused on what it is about.
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand I liked how the sentences flowed.